I have recently been looking at any changes that are necessary and have been re-doing my evaluation

This was the first draft of my second page

This was the second and third drafts of my main article, at the time it was just on one page and I was busy creating the second one

This is the second and final page to my main article

This is the 1st page of my main article

These are the two pictures I have used in my main article, they are both medium long shots

My main inspirations for this magazine and especially my main article that I am doing now have came from http://www.kerrang.com/ I used this website mainly for the development of my contents page. I also used http://www.mojo4music.com/blog/ for some extra inspirations for my front cover and to adapt my contents.

This is the very first draft of my main article, it is cheap and needs alot of work

This could be a possible photo for my main article, however it is too out of focus and the shot is not right as my models eyes do not look open but more a glare at the camera, the lighting in alot of my shots has caused problems as one side of my face has light across it making me look wrong.

I am doing preparations for my main article. I am thinking of using this photo for my main article, it is a good medium long shot, unlike most photos it is not in a normal pose but more like they are just walking past, it is more natural and I can use it for my story. However I am not sure as it is a bit blurred and out of focus so it all depends how it will look in my article.